ROUGH PINUP #1

Bax wrote:

Here goes some more sketchin'. I tried working a little more on the helmet, but I still don´t think I´m satisfied. Tell me what you think about the pinup layout - if you want to change or add anything, and if you are confortable with Gaffer - Lucy proportion to each other. Do you think it should be taller than her?

And here's the rough layout for the first pinup: