ORSON & EVELYN

Got the latest round of sketches from Bax.

Here's Orson:

And, here's Evelyn:

I think the characters are coming along really well, and only had a few minor changes on these.

Here's what I replied:

Orson - I like the look so far. His 'lens thing' around his neck should be a lot smaller - the reference pics I gave you didn't really show scale, sorry about that. It should be like 1/3 the size of that, maybe just a little bigger the size of one of those cansiters that 35mm film comes in.

Evelyn is looking good, and you have her anger down pretty well. She'll need the robotic arm though, since it's kinda crucial to her character (and, her robotic eye too). I love the space suit - it looks great!

As I work to polish and refine the first few scripts, it has become increasingly easy now that I can visualize how the characters will actually look in the book.