FIRST PENCILS

Bax sent me the first two penciled pages. I added the black around the boxes, since I think it gives that pages more presence in B&W. That, and the story is called "anamorphic", so the black helps give a cool 'widescreen' look to it.

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While Bax is finishing up the next three pages, I'll continue to refine the script and try to find someone to color or greyscale the pages.