MORE PAGE LAYOUTS

Bax is working on one of the character introduction/action scenes in issue one, and she sent along the following layouts:

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Page 12:



There pages are gonna have some slight changes after i send back my script-to-page feedback. Then, Bax'll switch-up a few things, and then shoot them back. And, then the pages get actually drawn.

When you see these two pages again, I'll post our exchange about what kind of changes we're making on them. And, I'll probably put up a script page for comparison.